Green leaves falling down
So graceful dancing on wind
change red and hits ground
Hail lands on my porch
the sounds create smooth music
and it melts away
The wind breeze is strong
it carries oceans along
for the ride, high tide!
Volcanoes erupt
spit out liquid flames, magma
Volcanoes explode
Earth is powerful
Its bold, stable, and rocky
Ultimate defense
Fire shoots from hole
casting darkness in the sky
when cooled its harmless
Sand, tiny and hard
It wants to be a pebble
when combined its made
Drifting in the sky
It is so weightless and free
Turns grey and makes rain
The tiger is wild
Its claws and fangs, razor sharp
Eye of the tiger
Smashed under pressure
Green blades of death, short wild grass
growing in a field.
I like how all of your haikus are related to nature even though that is what they are generally supposed to be about. Besides that I thought they were deep
ReplyDeleteVery nice Hiku,it showed very deep feelings!!
ReplyDeleteThe last one i like
ReplyDeleteThe whole elemental thing you have here is very nice
ReplyDeletegreat job i felt your abstractions and your creativity shines through
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